Dan Duffy
ENG 100 Assignment #3 Film Based Argument In Slumdog Millionaire, screenwriter Simon Beaufoy shares the story of Jamal, a boy who grew up in the slum neighborhoods of India and managed to gain a spot on the gameshow, Who Wants to be a Millionaire? Throughout the film, Jamal is shown as a person who must overcome many obstacles to survive, including an experience of torture when we provides the correct answers to too many gameshow questions. The people who host the show are all wondering how in the world a kid from the slums is getting all of these answers correct, so they torture him. Jamal’s torture does not reveal the confession his torturers are seeking because Jamal is telling the truth. Torture has been a controversial topic across the world and in America in particular. Jamal is about to win millions of dollars, but throughout the entire gameshow he hardly smiles. Wealth isn’t what brings Jamal happiness, but it’s what brings Salim happiness and that’s how the two brothers are completely different people. Jamal and Salim both lose their mother at a young age and have to go live on their own, only with each other. Salim is the older brother and Jamal always listens to him and follows him. Even at such a young age you could tell that wealth brought Salim happiness, but for Jamal not so much. Early on you can tell that the two brothers both have their own unique style to themselves. Salim is always looking for some way to provide money for the two so they can survive since they lost their mother. When Latika comes along Salim doesn’t bother to really care for her, but Jamal on the other hand just found his best friend, and the third person they needed to become the Three Musketeers. Once they get picked up by the group of men that turn kids into slaves, they can tell that Salim is a tough kid and they have him in charge of certain things. When the leader has Jamal to come sing for him, Salim saves his life and they escape, but Latika doesn’t make it because she let go of Jamal’s hand. Salim keeps telling Jamal throughout the film to just forget about her because she doesn’t bring him happiness, but she’s the only thing on Jamal’s mind. After they start ripping people off at the Taj Mahal, Jamal wants to get a regular job so he can find the love of his life, Latika. One day, Jamal runs into a blind boy singing and the boy recognizes Jamal by touching and feeling him and tells Jamal where Latika is after being given a crisp $100 bill. Salim still doesn’t care to finding her and still is telling Jamal to give up on her, but he doesn’t know that Latika is what brings Jamal true happiness, not just money as it does for Salim. Once they get to where Latika is being held, they get caught by Mamahan and Salim shoots him dead and they get away with Latika and the money. Jamal is finally happy to be reunited with her, but Salim has other plans. After going to the gangster that wanted Mamahan dead, Salim is given a job to work for him in the crime business and is about to start making serious money, and that is all he cares for. He puts a gun to Jamal’s head and kicks him out of the hotel room so Salim can do whatever he wants with Latika. It’s now clear that Salim doesn’t care about anything other then crime and money, which is what brings him happiness. Jamal can’t do anything about it and again he loses the one thing that truly brings him happiness. After years of not seeing each other, Jamal finds Salim and goes to him and the first thing he asks is where Latika is and he can’t believe that Jamal is still so hung up on her and says she’s gone, but that doesn’t stop Jamal from doing anything he can to find her. Throughout the film the only thing Jamal truly cares about is Latika, he doesn’t even recognize his own brother because all Salim cares about is getting rich and being able to do whatever he wants. In the end of the movie Salim finally realizes that Latika is what will bring his brother happiness as they sit and watch him on the show, so while the boss is out of the room he gives Latika his car keys and slips her out the back door. I think in that moment when he lets her go and then locks himself in the bathroom with all of the money with a gun waiting for the boss and all his troops to come in and kill him, he realizes that all along wealth isn’t the one thing that will bring him happiness. When Jamal uses his lifeline on the last question and Latika answers a huge smile erupts on his face, and at that point he doesn’t care if he gets the last question right or wrong because wealth isn’t what will bring him happiness, but Latika, who he’s been searching for the entire movie will because he never stopped loving her.
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Slumdog Millionaire had a very unique story to it. It started in Mumbai 2006 when Jamal and Salim were still children. They watched their own mother die right in front of them, and from then on they knew they only had each other. One night it was rainy they were sleeping under some shelter when Latika arrived and Salim didn't want to let her in, but Jamal had a heart and let her in and that's when they became the Three Musketeers. After that they are on their own trying to find food; anything. Then comes along a nice man at the time posing as orphanage people, but in reality they were turning kids into slaves basically. They have little kids sing for their master and Salim watches them take chloroform to his eyes and takes them out. Next up is Jamal to sing. They start having Jamal sing for the master and Salim knowing what they will do to them saves his life and they escape, as they are escaping Latika has Jamal's hand and lets go and stays behind. The only thing Jamal is thinking about during this entire film is finding their third musketeer; Latika. After they get away Salim and Jamal start stealing food and selling it to make money to live off of, but in one encounter they are caught and fall off the train at the Taj Mahal. They start ripping people off pretending they are tour guiders getting paid good money. After that they sneak into an orchestra and steal wallets and purses from under the bleachers. After that Jamal realizes he just wants a normal life and gets a regular job, but his main focus is still finding Latika. While Jamal is walking the roads he runs into one of the children that have gotten their eyes taken out and he gives the kid $100 to find out Latika's location. Salim and Jamal go to save Latika and run into the people that kidnapped them and tried making them into children slaves. Salim pulls out a gun and kills him. After that Salim becomes a gangster because he goes to the guy that wanted that master dead. Latika says to Jamal "its their destiny to be together". Then all of a sudden Salim comes in puts a gun to Jamal's head and kicks him out of the room to have sex with Latika and to bring her into the sex trade with his new boss, but Jamal is still determined to find her. Jamal goes on the show Who Wants to be a Millionaire and he starts getting all the questions right from having flashbacks from when he was in the slums and gets all the answers right and they think he is cheating. They try torturing him in every single way possible, but Jamal can't lie he tells them "I just know the answers" and they don't believe him. They let him continue on the show and he gets every question right, the host even tried tricking him by writing the answer on the mirror but he went with the other answer and is correct. Salim is working for his boss still and the boss leaves the room and he lets Latika leave and take his car and phone so she can try being with Jamal even though it means that he is taking his own life in order to do so. Latika gets to go watch Jamal answer the last question and he asks to use his life line and just as their about to hangup the phone, Latika answers and you can tell just by the look on Jamal's face that he is filled with happiness because he knows Latika got away. At that point Jamal could care less if he wins the money or not because this entire movie he has just been chasing the love of his life; Latika and he knows he finally has her. Jamal ends up winning the show and then after that he goes to the station he told Latika he would wait for her everyday at 5 and she is there. Jamal finally gets the thing he has been chasing the entire movie; love with Latika.
http://www.imdb.com/title/tt1010048/ For my movie I chose the movie Jamesy Boy which is on netflix. This movie is inspirational and teaches you a lot of life lessons. James starts off as a troubled kid that can't get into any schools because he's on house arrest and because everyone knows about who he is; just a bad kid. James meets Crystal and Drew after they rob a convience store, and after that he cuts off his house arrest band and goes on his own with Crystal and Drew to meet the guy they do runs for which his name is Roc. Roc is the kingpin you can call him. James starts working for him doing runs for him and becomes really close to Roc. He starts becoming Roc's second hand man doing all types of drug runs for him stuff he thinks he wants at the time, but in the long run he really doesnt want. Crystal the girl he thought loved him who really didn't love him turns her back on him because he wants to live a normal life with the girl he met that is a cashier at the convience store named Sarah who he is actually in love with.Then he goes to do a run for Roc and screws up and takes all these guns and tries to go sell them and then its a set up and he ends up getting caught and sent to jail. While in jail there's a asian gang that is trying to kill him and he gets in a fight with them to protect a new white kid that just got to prison. They go in the shower trying to stab James but the new kid ends up getting stabbed. James ends up going to the hole and meets a guy down there that gives him real life lessons and it really gets to James and he starts re-evaluating his life. After being in there for such a long time and after watching the white kid he was trying to protect hang himself James wants to turn his life around. Crystal wrote a 12 page statement blaming it all on him so she saves her own ass. James really develops as a person in there and changes and wants to be the man he always wanted to be. His parole hearing comes up and his mother wants him out so badly and when the parole hearing comes around he talks to them and convinces them that he is a changed man and wants to do better with his life and is released. Once released his old "homeboys" try getting him to get back into the game but he doesn't want it he wants to live a straight edge life. At the end he meets Sarah and finds out she's engaged and he reads her a poem about her and then after that he moves to NYC the place he's wanted to live his entire life and he gets a normal job and finds writing poetry a really good coping skill for him and he uses it to keep a straight edge life. This is all based on a true story. http://www.imdb.com/title/tt1673734/
We could ask: 1. What made James make the decision to want to be apart of the drug game? 2. What different emotions does James experience while he's locked up? 3. What are the main influences that made James want to become the person he is today? To write my academic mindset project I worked with my older brother and his girlfriend. They are both in college and were able to give me good suggestions on how I could get out of the high school mindset of not doing much to get by. Seeing them have goals for their classes and their kids helped me realize that there is more to life than going out all the time and that I want better for myself in the long run. It was a really good choice to work with them and bounce ideas back and forth because they are always showing me that you have to push yourself harder than what you think you are capable of if you want more in life. I watch them go to work and take care of my nieces every day no matter how tired they are or how much they have on their plate and I saw that if they can do it then I really have no excuse to be a better student than I am right now. While writing my project I saw that both of them were attending classes and doing homework all while taking care of two young girls and it put into perspective for me that I know I can do it. I wrote most of my project at home but next time I do a project I will do most of it at school because it can get crazy at home with my nieces there. I chose to write about my topic because the more I make myself aware of how I need to improve the easier it is to remind myself of how I need to keep going and force myself to be a better student if I want to move forward with my degree.
For my next writing process I am going to make a list of all of my points that I want to make in paper so that way when I go to write the paper I have a list of what I want to write about. My brother taught me that if I do this then it will be easier to build my paper and then I can take the points that I wrote down and branch off of those ideas to make the paper more full and it will lead to a better grade because there will be more content. I think this idea is where I can make the most improvement because with other assignments I would just start writing and would start talking about things that didn’t have to do with the assignment because I would lose track of my topic and it would make me lose focus of the whole point of the paper. Self efficacy is described as someone’s ability to succeed in life and their drive to keep going when things aren’t going their way. This has always been a huge struggle for me especially when it came to schoolwork and staying focused on my classes. Growing up with five other siblings, I was never the smartest, quickest, or the one with the most motivation. For the most part I was content with just getting by in my classes because that was all that I really needed to do in order to play baseball, which was all that I really cared about. When I got injured during a game and couldn’t play as much as I used to, my drive to do well in school and my self-esteem was non-existent. By the time senior year rolled around, all of my friends were talking about where they were going to college and I knew that I was meant for more than just slugging myself around from class to class. I started looking into different careers and even though I’m not sure what I want to do yet, I knew that I could do better for myself and be a better student once I got to college. While my friends all went away to West Chester University and seemed to be partying all the time, I quickly learned that there was no way I could keep up in college if I did that and to keep myself on track I would write what I wanted to accomplish that week in the notes application on my phone. I try to make small goals for myself so that way I don’t get too overwhelmed because that usually leads to me backing out of all of my responsibilities. One thing that I’m trying to keep up with my self efficacy is getting to campus a little early so that I can start being in class on time and not come a half hour late. Another thing that I’ve been doing to motivate me to get my work done is that I set aside a block of time on Fridays to try getting all of my blogs done or get caught up on work that I’m behind on so I can reward myself by hanging out with friends that weekend. Even though I have a long way to go with my grades, I am improving my self efficacy and the way I view myself as a college student.
Draft #1Carol Dweck and Alfie Kohn are two completely different people when it comes their academic mindsets argument. Mindsets are the way people think, take things, how their brain operates, people can have a different definition for what a mindset is because in this world I believe everyone has a different mindset. "In Teachers, Parents Often Misuse Growth Mindset Research, Carol Dweck Says" (Carol Dweck). Dwecks main point is that having a growth mindset can't just be told to someone, but that it needs to actually put into steps and into action! Now having a Fixed Mindset can be okay with some people because they are so comfortable with it that they don't want to bother with changing anything in how they approach things, and are also not even up to a new challenge given to them because of their fixed mindset! For me personally I'm not gonna lie, yeah, I do have a fixed mindset at times but at times I have a growth mindset, it all really depends on who other stuff I am focusing on. I know most students have a growth mindset because they are obviously going to school for a reason! They want to learn and they want to succeed, and that is what I am personally working on for myself. To only have a growth mindset would help me out in many ways, I would start to learn things and understand things more instead of sitting in school not caring or paying any attention into the class and throwing money away. My goal starting today is to start having a growth mindset instead of a fixed mindset. Whenever I am in class I'm always the quiet one. i don't speak much, but I do listen and I always want to chime in on class discussions, ask questions and just actually talk and not sit in silence for hours checking my phone knowing that theres no notification for anything. As of now I don't know why I haven't done research on this before writing this, because now I know I've had a fixed mindset this entire time! With my fixed mindset I just feel comfortable doing things my way and not liking any change; and that's why I've been failing at many things. My academic grades have always been average or below average and I want that to change A.S.A.P. and it will if i start using my growth mindset. All throughout high school I feel like i can barely remember any of the work I did, any of the important things that i should have been trying to learn, but never asked questions because of the fixed mindset I had back then I didn't care if i passed with a D, as long as I passed the class I thought I was fine. In the long run though it was a terrible mistake not having a growth mindset then. Something that caught my eye after reading The, Perils of "Growth Mindset Education"(...)(Alfie Kohn) was when Kohn stated " A substantial research literature has shown that the kids typically end up less interested in whatever they were rewarded or praised for doing, because now their goal is just to get the reward or praise". I disagree but also agree with him, I say that because yeah a kid could keep on doing it for the reward and praise, but that doesn't mean that they are not interested in what they're doing? Thats what doesn't make sense to me, yeah some kids I completely understand that if they see that they are getting rewarded and praised for it they will just keep doing the same thing over and over again, but only or the reward. Other students that are just very good at something and they are getting rewarded and praised for it, that can give them motivation to just keep doing what they have been doing but just more into it, you can say. There have been many, MANY teachers that I've experienced that never cared if you even had an important question, you know, the ones that sit there and make you write notes all day and don't even really teach! They just write down the notes or you look online and they basically tell you to teach it to yourself, but theres only been a few that rude. But I have had a lot of teachers that would do the same thing with writing a ton of notes and if you asked a question they would just get annoyed and would tell you to look in your notes or just briefly explain it to you quickly because they think that we all just can teach it to ourselves basically and those are the type of teachers that sort of rubbed off a fixed mindset on me. I always would ask for help in class in middle school, and high school but I was getting in a lot of trouble in my early years so they basically put me in with the hardest, meanest teachers in the grade that everyone would be like "Damn, that sucks you got them as your teacher, haha good luck with that". Those teachers never seemed to help me out and to be honest I sort of started to give up and get into more trouble in school because I wasn't doing good in class, would get in trouble at home for failing. I always need teacher or a tutor that I can connect with and be able to feel comfortable asking them questions, someone that will sit there and converse with you and further explain something for you. That's me pretty talking about Sabatino, but i just haven't had a growth mindset yet. It always makes me more confident in myself and gives ,myself motivation when I have a cool teacher that actually sits down and helps you out when your struggling, not just run through your notes real quick barley help or even help at all if you lucky if they are one of those teachers that make your mind turn into a fixed mindset. When I was younger I was pretty bad in school with book work. It took me a long time to make any progression my eyes were messed up which made me get glasses. Back then we were so young that I feel as if the teachers didn't think how we did in school mattered we were little kids in second or third grade. Dweck states (In Teachers, Parents Often Misuse Growth Mindset Research, Carol Dweck) that instead of pushing off your students you should sit down with them and explain what they did wrong and how it can be fixed for next time. If you understood how strict my parents were then you would know they were giving me a spanking if i came home with a bad grade which I was doing. When it came time for parent/teacher conferences my mom asked what I was doing wrong to all of my failing classes teachers. They all said that I was just not paying any attention in class I would sit there and do absolutely nothing, not ask any questions or anything, even when they tried helping me I still wouldn't do it. After my parents came home and talked to me about how important school is and said that it will be a big part of my life I changed how I acted in school. I started paying attention and not screwing around, I went and got glasses because my vision was making me not able to see the board even when I would be in the front. What I'm getting at is that when you have the Growth Mindset and not a Fixed Mindset you can achieve anything. My parents sitting me down and having that talk with me and telling me how serious school is and how it can shape out the rest of my life, and how they started helping me with my homework and started making me study instead of not caring was a big factor into my positive growth mindset. All in all, I 100% agree with Carol Dweck.
For my hiraeth I wrote about my grandmom. In my draft I didn’t get to write all that I wanted to write, I could’ve kept typing about her for hours. While I was writing and thinking about memories I have with her, I started to feel like she was right there back with me. I had a picture of me and her sitting right next to me so I could look at a happy moment I had with her, and that got my mind racing. Tons of memories with my Grandmom came to mind, good and bad. It made me have all types of emotions going through my mind, so before I even started to write my draft I went and talked to my father, who was the son of my grandmom, and sat and just talked to him about memories with her. I also went and talked to him because it was the day of her 2 year death anniversary and we were both upset, but he clearly was hurting more. While we sat there and talked about her we both cried, laughed, got serious, joked around, every emotion possible. After the conversation with my father it felt like a big weight was lifted off my shoulders and I was finally able to write about her with a clear mind. The thing that also gave me motivation to write about her was seeing that I changed my father’s mood and changed his attitude also. While I sat in my room alone with the picture of me and my grandmom sitting next to me, I felt relieved and nauseous at the same time, since I miss her so much. As I started writing, more memories kept coming back to me and I felt as if she was there reminding me of everything we did, and everything that has happened over the years, even since her passing. After writing up my quick first draft so I didn’t miss the deadline I sat and reminisced about her for a while. It changed my mindset and attitude towards a lot of things, but most importantly gave me faith in everything. Now I feel like my grandmom is with me everywhere I go watching over me. The reason I even chose to write about her is because she was the closest thing to home I could think of. She was my best friend, my grandmother, and most importantly the biggest role model in my life.
One specific scene that I'm using from my hiraeth project is one that I'll never forget. The scene is sad, but at the same time relieving. My grandmom ended up getting a brain tumor and moved in with me and my family. She would sit in her recliner chair in the family room watching qvc all day long ordering the most random things. It was summer time so sometimes I would go out and sit on the deck with her and she would just tell me all types of stories about her life, while giving me advice at the same time. After I would wheel her back in on her wheelchair, she would have to start trying to do her excersises with whatever nurse we had at the time; my grandmom always had an attitude and she would argue with the nurse saying she isn't going to do it while laughing. She would finally cave into doing them and she would get help up to try thing baby steps with her water since her body became so weak from the cancer, but my point being after she finally caved in she would give me a little smirk and wink and say "Love you Danno". I would sit there all day with my grandmom on summer days when I wasn't doing anything because neither would she, and even though she couldn't move out of her chair on her own, we would still always manage to have a fun day together and it be nothing but laughs. That's one thing she was the best at; no matter what she would make me smile.
When Sabatino first said hiraeth, I didn't even know how to pronounce it. To me the definition on a hiraeth is a longing for a home that you can't go back to. At first I had no idea what I would write about because I can't remember much of my childhood, and I sure as hell didn't want to write about an ex girlfriend. I chose to write about my grandmom. She is not a home but she is a person that I considered my home. I remember many details about her and miss her everyday since she past away two years ago. I could say that my grandmom is something that I long for and wish I could have back, but can't. my grandmother was the sweetest person you'd ever meet. There is many things that I could write about her but one of the main things that comes to mind when I think about my grandmom is going to Sunday mass with my whole family and always going out to breakfast with her. It's something I would wait for all week because i was younger, so that was the highlight of the week. I can remember specifics of those days that I remember like the back of my hand, but that's something I'd like to wait to with about in my hiraeth. Going to family parties before she got sick was always the best because she was herself and was the grandmom I loved with my entire heart seeing her dancing to her favorite song "Sweet Caroline" with all of her friends that she grew up with and stayed friends with her entire life. There's lists of things i could say about my grandmom and what I remember, but I'm gonna think long and hard about the specific scenes I remember the most about her and the details about them, it's hard to pick because my grandmom was my best friend I could ever have.Hiraeth Draft #1Every Sunday morning at the crack of dawn I would always be woken up to the sound of the wood floors creaking from my dad already up walking around the house getting the coffee made to start his day. I would then lie my head gently back on my special pillow I had always used at the time that had “Phillies” written on it with the logo in the background and fall back to sleep. It was never a problem falling back asleep after being awoken at 5 am since I would only be awake for those few minutes, but basically still asleep. Pretty much like when you get woken up by something randomly in the middle of the night, your mind is pretty much still asleep and you sit there all dazed and confused, then fall back asleep like nothing happened. Next thing you know I’m woken up again by my 4 brothers arguing with each other arguing over who is going to shower first! My brother Jimmy was always the one that ended up getting the first/hottest shower. I was only 6 years old at the time and my sister Katie was 8 years old, and we never cared too much about getting up and fighting over the shower because it was always the same outcome, also we’re the 2 youngest out of the 6 Duffy children. The only thing that we would look forward to every Sunday morning was seeing our Grandmom for church. My grandmom was the most loving, kind-hearted woman you would ever meet. After everyone was dressed and all ready to go, we would cram into my mom’s old purple minivan and head over to St. Joeseph’s church. I remember the van not having enough room for all 6 of us in the back because my 3 older brothers are a lot older then us last 3 kids born, so my brother Ryan would always complain and would squeeze onto the seat but my sister and I would always get stuck sitting on the beat down floor of the minivan or sit on one of our brother’s laps. It was always a horrible 7 minute drive down the street to the church. My brother Ryan would always be complaining saying, “stop pinching me Mike! Just let me sit on the seat church is right down the street you can squeeze your fat in, I’m not sitting on the nasty floor”. He would always say something smart and those two would always get into an argument on the way to church, which would make my mom turn around and start yelling “You guys better knock it the hell off or I’m gonna tell your grandmother and she won’t let you guys go out to breakfast with her and Aunt I, so knock it off!”. When we would arrive at church I would be the first out of the jam packed minivan and would see a crowd of people from every family in our town, Briarcliffe. There were always tons of people there, everyone would be dressed up nice in their suits and ties, dresses and heels, and sunglasses and hats for when it was sunny out. While the rest of my family would be getting out of the car ready for church I would try getting through the huge crowd of people surrounding the outside of the church so I could get over to the front right corner of the church where my Grandmom and Aunt I would always be standing waiting for our dysfunctional family to arrive. When I was close to getting to them I could always tell because I would smell the Marlboro lights they would both be smoking before we all go in as a group for the 7 am mass. My grandmom’s big blue eyes and wrinkly face would light up with joy when she would finally see me with the big thick glasses she used to have, coming towards her from the crowd and she would always bend down, put her arms out, waiting for me to run up to her and would say “There’s my Danno!!! Come give your grandmom a big fat kiss and a hug”. As she sits there bent over squeezing me with all of her might giving me the biggest hug she could possibly give and would always look at me and stop, and with the smell of cigarettes hitting me in the face she would always whisper to me “You know you’re my favorite Danno”, while giving me a small quick wink before my sister comes running up to hug her just moments before the rest of the Duffy crew come walking up. We always went into church as a full, there was never one of us missing as we walked up the big flight of steps that felt like a million to head into church. We would have to sit through the 45 minute mass, keep standing, sitting, and kneeling, as bored as a 6 year old could ever be. My Grandmom, Aunt I, and my parents were always singing along with the songs and reading the bible verses as the preist reads them to the big room filled with other families of all sorts. I would always get mad when they would go up for their communion because at the time I wasn’t old enough to get it yet and would have to sit in my seat starving since we wouldn’t eat before church to prepare ourselves for the big breakfast were getting after. I would always say to my grandmom and parents “ Why don’t I get to have a piece of bread I’m starving!”, and they would sit there smiling at each other and tell me “When your old enough you’ll be able to walk up there with us, but it’s not so great tasting”. I knew mass would be coming to an end when the priest would have everyone greet each other with the sign of peace and shake hands with the people surrounding you, that’s when I would start to get real excited. I would be shaking everyone’s hands while thinking of the stack of chocolate chip pancakes, French toast, whatever I decided I wanted to get that Sunday for breakfast. When mass would end most of the times it would only be my Grandmom, Aunt I, and my sister going out to breakfast because my other siblings would be too tired and my parents wouldn’t want to go, so we would get to hangout with my Grandmom for the day and she always started it off y either making us breakfast at her place or taking us out. We would do it every Sunday morning after the 7 o’clock mass was over up until we moved. Questions I would like my group to ask me, Couldn't figure out how to get it into the comments.
1. What are some thing's I could work on to make my writing a better piece? (Not gonna lie rushed through and put as much details as possible so I had it in before the deadline there's still much more to put in.) 2. Should I stick to the path I'm heading in scene wise or did I put too much detail into the one scene? 3. What our your guys opinion on my hiraeth first draft so far? It's not criticism, it'll help me build as a writer. |
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